does anyone want to give me adive on my common app essay?

<p>Hey there! I have just written my common app essay (I have re-written it several times) and need some advice. Would any parent like to read my essay? I have already asked some high schoolers, and they seem to like it--- but I want to get the opinion of an adult. Thanks!</p>

<p>i’ll read it! just send it to me</p>

<p>pm it to me too. I don’t have anyone applying this year and I genuinely like to write, so I’d be happy to take a look. Good job getting it done early!</p>