<p>I dont even know what the hell I've written and I'm having a panic attack and major writer's block--not that i was a writer to begin with... I would really really appreciate it if someone, anyone, read this over for some quick feedback. I would paste it but to be honest am somewhat (understatement) embarrassed by it. I will be happy to read yours in exchange...</p>
<p>Its not even that its that bad... though it might be... but more that it might not come together, it could be dull, whinny, crazy, etc. just odd</p>