My essay is a mess, not really an essay :P Will I ever get in? It even has dialogue!!

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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>My essay is not.... really an essay. When I wrote it I felt so confident that it was such a good piece of writing.</p>

<p>It's more like something you'd get out of a.... I don't know, a strange novel?</p>

<p>Anyway I spoke about scenes (3 separate parts under its own headings) in my life where music took over and I became ridiculous, kinda, mostly in non-sentences, not really a properly structured essay at all.</p>

<p>Anyone would want to have a look and critique/comment? I already submitted this for my ED to Cornell CAS, but reading it again before submitting my RD applications, I am really doubting the quality of my essay and would really love a critical eye on it please :)</p>

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<p>Send it over. Sometimes crazy can be good.</p>

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<p>Yes. I’ll read it and comment.</p>

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<p>Send it over. I can help.</p>