Duke essay help!

<p>Hey everyone. I'm not entirely sure if my essay answers the prompt completely. Can somebody please go over it and critique it honestly? I'd be really thankful. </p>

<p>P.S the deadline will be over in 10 hours. I just want to be sure my essay is relative to the prompt before I submit my supplement.</p>

<p>I’ll read it and let you know my opinion</p>

<p>I’m sorry. I just saw your reply now but I goy my essay reviewed by some teachers. Thanks anyway!</p>