<p>hi, i am applying to duke university for 2010 Fall.
I was working on my essay but i want to know how to make it better. is there anyone willling to look at it?
Question: If you are applying to Trinity College of Arts and Sciences, please discuss why you consider Duke a good match for you. Is there something in particular at Duke that attracts you? Please limit your response to one or two paragraphs.</p>
<p>I can take a look at it</p>
<p>I can look at it. I already did it, but my last line killed the whole essay since I finished it at about 11:59 p.m. of the interview deadline.</p>