Eagle Scout Essay Needs Some Work, Could Anyone Help?

<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>I am working on my applications, and I have actually already applied ED to Brown. Unfortunately, my essays werent my strong point (I waited until the last minute). I want to try and make them much better now so the next round of applications will be a lot better. </p>

<p>I wrote my main Common App essay on my attainment of Eagle Scout and how that taught me leadership and service, etc. Its pretty cliche, I know. </p>

<p>Any help would be great! Also, if you think its a bad topic, tell me and I might even redo it!</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>bumpy bumpy..anyone? i would really appreciate any feedback!</p>