<p>Will someone please edit my diversity essay and tell me what makes sense, what doesn't, etc. I'll PM the essay. I really need help.</p>
<p>Send it :)</p>
<p>Send it and I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>If you can’t have a teacher look at it, you might want to ask a friend who is a good student. I think peer editors make some good suggestions.</p>