Editing my "why this college" essay

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<p>Hi!</p>

<p>Would anyone be willing to look over one of my supplemental essays?
I feel like it might be too "general". </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I don’t edit essay, but can tell you some things to think about:

  • You are looking to hit the intersection between you and the college. What are your specific academic interests, ECs, or things about the community around the college that make it a good fit for you?
  • Mention specific classes you sat in on, professors whose research is interesting to you, courses in the catalog you would be particularly excited to take, facilities they have on campus that you really like, etc.</p>
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<p>I could take a look if you wish, but as intparent said, please take those points into consideration. </p>

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<p>sure, i’d help, PM me</p>

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<p>Hi, you can run it by me if you need more help.</p>

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<p>Refer to my feedback in post #3:
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1718805-can-someone-give-me-feedback-on-my-why-nyu-essay.html#latest”>Can someone give me feedback on my, why NYU essay? - College Essays - College Confidential Forums;

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<p>Check this out: <a href=“Essay Advice: Tips for "Why this school?" essay - College Essays - College Confidential Forums”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1211206-essay-advice-tips-for-why-this-school-essay.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>sur , PM me and i would love to help</p>