HELP with my NYU essay PLEASE!

<p>Please let me know if you can help me revise it and give me suggestions so i can send it to you! My deadline is approaching really soon so any advice is welcome. Thank you</p>

<p>What was your topic? Kind of hard to help if I don’t know, but I’ll read it if you want. I’ve been told by many people I’m very good at writing essays and I’ve edited most of my peer’s college essays</p>