emergency editing

<p>i have a really odd supp. essay that i'm not sure i should submit. can someone read and give me feedback by THIS AFTERNOON? thanks</p>

<p>I can read right now.</p>

<p>i pmed it to you.</p>

<p>anyone else? i need as many opinions as posssible, please =)</p>

<p>okay i submitted it. no need for any more editing!</p>