<p>I've just finished my supplemental Yale essay, but I guess it could still use some editing. Does anyone feel up to making a few comments about it?</p>
<p>is that the same essay you sent me last time?</p>
<p>No, this is another one. Do you want to read this one too?</p>
<p>I'd really appreciate it if someone could help me out with this.</p>
<p>sure thing pm me</p>
<p>I'll read if you pm me</p>
<p>i can give some feedback.</p>
<p>if you want more feedback, you can send it onto me as well.</p>
<p>Sure PM me and I'll proofread it for u.</p>
<p>You've got plenty of people reading here, but if you need anyone else, PM it along ^^ xD</p>