Engineering chances? I won't give hugs/cookies, but will give thanks

<p>Yea, my essay was turbo specific. I talked about how:
thermal depolymerization is used at two butterball facilities to process turkey carcasses and they operate at a net energy surplus (IE, they extract more energy from the fuel stock then they use). The use of these two facilities illustrates that the problem with TDP is not perfecting th process, but mass producing a series of machines that could process municipal waste and be cheaply recreated. My dream is to design and market these machines. In order to do so, I will not only need a superior engineering education, but also connections to future heads of industry and government (alludes to ILR, PAM and AEM students). Only at cornell can a student like myself find the necessary resources and connections to revolutionize the energy sector and save the environment. </p>

<p>I highly highly highly recommend cutting out flowery prose and sweeping generalizations in your cornell specific essay and keep it to severly intense meat and potatoes engineering aspirations and ideas. My essay was PACKED full with 500 words, each of which served a precise purpose. Do NOT waste your words on aesthetics, use them on ideas…</p>

<p>Brevity is the soul of whit- Bill Shakespeare.</p>

<p>^lolwut???</p>