Error I.D. Question

<p>Hey guys, for the writing section, collegeboard lists "redundancy" as one of the topics to watch out for, but the only real example I could find was "In the year 1981" should just be "In 1981". Do any of you know off hand any other redundancies tested? Thanks a lot.</p>

<p>bump......</p>

<p>"the reason is because..."
"the reason is that..."</p>

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I want to know too.</p>

<p>I also want to know when to use who and whom ; we and us.</p>

<p>WE go to the store.
you gave the ball to US.</p>

<p>WE is direct object pronoun
US is indirect</p>

<p>basically, WE are doing an action. US get to receive something</p>

<p>No in like some other form like...
For (We or Us)? students, concern about impending tuition hikes was even more acute than apprehension about final exams.</p>

<p>Always select the choice that states the most complete and correct info in the most succinct way. If 2 choices say the same thing and both say it with proper grammar, always select the shorter one.</p>