<p>Look, I'm good with writing other kinds of essays, but not this overly personal stuff. That said, can you guys possibly read my essay and give me a few pointers? It's for schools like Cornell, UTAustin, Columbia, GTech, Berkeley, and some others.</p>
<p>Ill gladly read your essay.</p>
<p>Sure, you can PM me (and when's the deadline?)</p>