essay #1

<p>for those who have been accepted or are currently a student:</p>

<p>can someone read my essay and tell me what i should alter??</p>

<p>thanks.</p>

<p>Of course- but my rates are steep. </p>

<p>One pound of chocolate per hour. Seven pound after 3 hours. </p>

<p>Hit me up on AIM. I'm not the best at it, but it looks like no one else is being very nice. I'll even wave the fee for you- don't tell anyone.</p>

<p>I'll read it without a fee :). However, to keep competition fair, you owe me a favor... Just PM me the essay, I'll definately take a look at it.</p>

<p>thanks guys. anyone else?</p>

<p>i'll take a look and give feedback</p>