<p>Hey everyone!</p>
<p>I just wrote the first draft of my common app essay. The flow is a bit odd and I don't think it really clicks with the established essay format. Would anyone be willing to take a look at it and give me some feedback?</p>
<p>Hey everyone!</p>
<p>I just wrote the first draft of my common app essay. The flow is a bit odd and I don't think it really clicks with the established essay format. Would anyone be willing to take a look at it and give me some feedback?</p>