Essay Critique

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I've been working on my essay for about a month now, and it's basically done; however, I want some other opinions/suggestions/etc on it. I'll be applying to Wharton and was really trying to make my personality show throughout this writing. If you're a student I'm willing to critique yours as well.</p>

<p>Also, I'm having some trouble attacking the Penn supplements especially the Huntsman essay. Tips and Ideas would be helpful.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>PM it over and I can take a look.</p>

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<p>I can take a look too if youd like?</p>

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<p>You can pm me and I can critique :)</p>

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<p>PM me please :)</p>

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<p>PM me ill read.</p>

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<p>PM me if you like</p>

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<p>PM if you want some advice imrenj.</p>

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<p>PM me i can look it over!</p>

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<p>PM me and I’d be happy to take a look for you!</p>

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<p>Sent out all the PMs!</p>

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<p>i can help you out</p>