Would any parents/adult members of CC be willing to read a draft of my common app essay? I just want to make sure this is an idea I can keep pursuing as an essay, or whether I should find something different.
Thank you. 
Anyone…?
Sure!
I have experience with writing my own essays and editing essay for my students that I tutor. I would love to help you edit your essay-- give you some feedback, suggest edits, or just give you some ideas. I found that feedback from my peers, who have recently gone through the experience of writing actually provide some of the most relevant feedback. You can PM me if you’d like.
Sure. PM Me when you get the chance.