Essay for UPenn, Stanford, Cornell, Northwestern, Datmouth

College Essays
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<p>I'm sending Common App for the above schools</p>

<p>Can anybody take a look at it and give me some advice?</p>

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<p>I'll take a look it, pm it over.</p>

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<p>pm it over...
p.s. wow those are some of the best schools in the country!! Do you want to go into business?</p>

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<p>I'd like to critique or give you some advice. Send it over and I am going to give it a read.</p>

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<p>sure, pm me. I'll look over it.</p>

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<p>I would like to review your essay. pm me please.</p>

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<p>I can take a look at your essay and give you advice if you need anyone else.</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll edit your essay. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'd read your essay, and give my honest opinion.</p>

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<p>pm me il read it</p>

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<p>pm me! ill read and edit it if possible :)</p>

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<p>pm me too.</p>

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<p>Hi originpranks, I've critiqued essays for several ivy league applicants in the past five days including thisisspartaaa (Upenn), jenkster (Stanford), SandyRun (Princeton), tonyspizza (Brown), olawunmi8 (Stanford), and several others. PM them for proof.</p>

<p>If you need an additional analysis, feel free to PM me.</p>

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<p>ill critique it</p>

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<p>Sure I'll do it, I just finished editing one like 10 min ago</p>

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<p>sure, pm me</p>

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<p>sure...ill help</p>

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<p>I can definitely help
PM me</p>

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<p>i will take a look if you want another opinion.</p>

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<p>pm i'll tell you the absolute truth haha just a sincere opinion</p>