<p>Yeah, can someone who's good at looking/critiquing essays read mine and tell me what's good/not good about it? I'll do the same for you, I've done it a lot in the past. I'm looking at UPENN, Princeton, Yale, Northwestern, and Wash U. I just need some comments. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
<p>Sure. I just did mine. Wanna trade?</p>
<p>absolutely, but be careful of telling everyone what schools ur applying to (especially if their top schools).</p>
<p>PM me yours and I will PM you my common app essay</p>
<p>Biggie…would you like my help? I’ll PM you.</p>
<p>batxc–sounds good!</p>
<p>piggybank–I’ll take that suggestion to heart. Just out of curiosity, you can reply with PM, what difference does it make since there’s a lot of anonymity on CC? I’m just wondering. </p>
<p>zweebopp–sure!</p>
<p>Thanks for all the help so far, anyone else?!?!?!</p>
<p>me, let’s swap</p>
<p>hey cool i want to swap.</p>
<p>I’ll help you. Taken AP English and Composition. PM ur essay</p>
<p>i would love to read it, and am quite experienced in dissecting and editing. pm it to me</p>
<p>First of all, thanks to all who helped me so far. I took all the good advice, and I also got one of my English teachers to read it, and he gave a lot of good suggestions. Basically, I’m doing some major revising/rewriting of it right now. I’ll send it to the newer posters in a few days, but I really appreciate the help!!!</p>