Essay HELP!

<p>Hey everyone! I've finally finished my admissions essay but I'm not sure it's what they're looking for, if maybe a few people could it read it for me and give me some feedback as well as point out what must be a multitude of grammar mistakes I would be forever grateful!! My gpa is 3.7 now because I received a 4.0 in my most recent semester of community college but my grades prior to that and in high school were nothing great, along with a slightly above average SAT score. I know a lot rides on my essay and any help would great!</p>

<p>Please send it to me zhan941@**********, with your stats. I do whatever I can and know.</p>

<p>Send it to me at saintpaul_abs***********</p>