<p>Would anyone mind taking a look at my common app essay? </p>
<p>At first I thought it had potential but now every time I revise it I find something new I don't like with it. Its to a point where I'm not really sure if I'm fixing it or slowly tearing it to shreds. I think maybe I need a fresh opinion on it so I can decide whether or not it's salvageable.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>