Is a sibling in prison and relating that to my life a hook?
No, but it could be a good essay.
Is it a hook? No. Can it be an interesting essay topic? Yes.
Agree with the above. Not a hook, but it could be a compelling essay.
But is it relevant? For OP’s admit review? Usually not.
OP needs to understand what a hook is, what makes an essay good. And more.
I’m sorry for what your family is dealing with.
You asked over a month ago, so I imagine your essay is written.
Please make sure that your essay is about YOU and the growth you’ve experienced. It would be very easy to write a compelling essay about your brother, or about your family. But they’re not applying to college. You have only 650 words to “sell” your application. . Be careful.
Thanks for the input! I definitely understand that the essay has to be about me, and it is already written. I have had it looked at, and I have had positive feedback so far.