essay i wrote for Johns Hopkins ED

College Essays
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<p>anybody wants to give me a good feedback???</p>

<p>its ED deadline is 11/15 so i dont have that much time..</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>can't promise it's a good feedback, but i will give feedback.</p>

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<p>ill give it a go</p>

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<p>Sure.. I'll read it.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM it</p>

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<p>My cousin goes to JHU so if you send it over quick enough I can let him have a look. I remember his essay wasn't that great but he got in.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too. Send it over.</p>

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<p>I'm a strong writer, and I'll be happy to look over it for you.</p>

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<p>I'll help you out.</p>

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<p>hi i will read it for you and give feedback. i already sent my jhu ed essay so i could give you tips and stuff!</p>

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<p>Just PM it</p>

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<p>PM it..'ll see</p>

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<p>I already sent in my JHU essays for ED. I'll read it and be more than happy to help you out.</p>

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<p>I'll read it just pm me, i'll try and help</p>

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<p>I ll have a look, and I ll try to give u my suggestions</p>

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<p>be quick to PM me, you don't have much time</p>

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<p>ill read it. pm me.</p>

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<p>ill read it too</p>