Essay Peer Review for UC Application

Would anyone be willing to read and provide critical feedback for one of my essays for the University of California application? I don’t have anyone else to help me.

yes always willing to help someone out(I’m still new to the boards though)

yes, and I need someone to read mine too

sure! pm me

I would suggest, STRONGLY, that you share your essay only with adult posters with a proven posting history! Click on the name, look at “threads” and look for evidence of a spouse, kids, and/or a career.

Otherwise you run a strong risk of having your essay plagiarized.