<p>Hi there! I’m applying to Amherst RD and just wrote the first draft of the supplement essay. I responded to the following quote: “Stereotyped beliefs have the power to become self-fulfilling prophesies for behavior.” I would love some critiques, preferably from those knowledgeable about Amherst admissions in particular. Thanks in advance! :)</p>
<p>Ill read it</p>
<p>Send it to me. That old English teacher in me couldn't resist.</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it...am applying to amherst myself....</p>
<p>hey i would like to see it!</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>ill read it too</p>
<p>I'm an Amherst student who should be working on my final papers, but I'll help out anyone who sends me their essays. :)</p>
<p>I just got in and would gladly read it</p>
<p>Hey I'm working on that essay now with that exact quote! Any tips?</p>
<p>Hey I'm working on that Amherst essay now with that exact quote! Any tips?</p>
<p>Nothing like this for an ego-boost. I'd like to read it, just because I'd like to see what other people wrote (I've already applied). You might be a much better writer than I am.</p>