Essay Revisions

<p>Hello, CC community it has been a while since I've last posted here since I've been working diligently on my college essays (jk really actually kind of procrastinating as much as possible). Anyway I have finished my 1st copy of the common app essay and would love the advice of some people from here. For obvious reasons I'm not going to publicly post my essay; however, for those of you helpful CCers that have nothing better to do on a Wednesday night ;) could you please shoot me a PM and I will send you a copy so that you can edit it (preferably just rewrite it - jk).</p>

<p>Any criticism will be highly appreciated whether it be grammar, structure, content or anything else that makes me a terrible writers. Also please if you have not been through college, don't PM me because once again for obvious reasons I'd prefer that the people reviewing my paper don't have to turn around and answer the same prompt in 20 minutes.</p>

<p>Thanks
egelloc80</p>

<p>bump bump bump</p>