<p>If anyone is willing to read my essay and give some feedback I would appreciate it, thanks.</p>
<p>-if you want let me know and i will pm</p>
<p>will you read my first para. and tell me what you think aswell</p>
<p>If anyone is willing to read my essay and give some feedback I would appreciate it, thanks.</p>
<p>-if you want let me know and i will pm</p>
<p>will you read my first para. and tell me what you think aswell</p>