Hello, Everyone 
I am an international student applying to US colleges. Unfortunately, I have no one who knows the American admission process let alone the admission essays.
Do you mind reading my very common app essay and giving me feedback? I will be forever grateful
Be careful with giving essays to random people. Who knows what they can do with it.
Thanks for advice
I can review it for you
Your essay is your personal property. You should be careful not to give it to anyone who can steal your idea. Maybe if you can afford it, you can pay for one of those essay reviewers online or give it to someone at your current school/college as a professor or teacher and have them review it.