Feedback on main essay & supplement, please?

<p>Has anyone who has applied ED or is a student of Pitzer willing to provide critiques on my main essay and Pitzer supplement? I have two hours until I have to press submit!</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I’m not a grad but I applied too (already pressed submit, won’t steal your ideas) and love giving advice on this kind of thing so if you’d like I can look it over if nobody else responds in time!</p>

<p>Thank you! I PMed you.</p>