Feeling Stuck- Review the beginning of my essay?

<p>I am acutally applying for an MSW program and am supposed to write an autobiographical statement about persevering in the face of adversity, commitment to social justice, etc.</p>

<p>I am working on the beginning and feel horribly stuck. Can someone review to tell me if it is at least workable??</p>

<p>Thanks. :)</p>

<p>yeah ill do it. PM me</p>

<p>will do it. email me. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>