<p>Hey, I've got an essay I really want to get a second opinion on....actually, a couple essays. My editor right now says that I need to talk about how my experiences affected how I feel and think more, but I dunno. Can someone help me out by glancing over these things? I'd appreciate it so much. Thanks!</p>
<p>i'll help, pm me</p>
<p>We should all trade essays.</p>
<p>yea, ill check it out and give feedback, i already got accepted to my ea school so yea</p>