[Final] Chance me

Major: Finance

Universities (favorite to least): UPenn, Cornell, NYU, UVA, UMich, Carnegie, Notre Dame, Emory, Boston College, USC, UNC and Madison.

About myself:

  • Age: 20
  • Citizenship: US, German (I grew up in Germany)
  • Residence: CA
  • Gender: Male
  • Race: White
  • I have a GED

Community College:

  • CC: Orange Coast College
  • Major: Business Administration
  • GPA: 4.00 (I had one W in my first semester)
  • Credits: 58 in Spring
  • Honors Societies: 6+
  • I completed all the Prerequisites for all the Universities

Additional Factors:

  • SAT: 1270: Schools that require the SAT: UPenn, UVA, Boston College, Notre Dame and possibly UNC.
  • Toefl: 29-29-26-23
  • Need based financial aid: No
  • Recommendations: English and either Math, or Economics.
  • Personal Essay: Very strong

Extra-curricular:

  • I invest on my own. My profits for the last year were about $100,000 and in percentages it was about a 50% gain. I have extensive knowledge in stocks, options and the basics of futures and Forex.
  • My friend and I had a pretty decent network, in which we exchanged our thoughts and ideas.
  • Volunteering in Germany.
  • Foreign Exchange to the US (7th and 11th grade)
  • Internship at a Computer Store (back when I was into Video Games…)
  • I also participated in a business club for a while, but no leadership positions.

My weaknesses:

  • My Sat in general and my TOEFL writing score: I hope that having a very strong recommendation from my English teacher will help out. She knows a little bit about my situation and likes to support students, who use community college as an opportunity to make up for old mistakes. This also ties into my personal essay.
  • High-School: I graduated with a GED. I basically only took one year of high-school and my highest GPA was between 2.3-3.0. I did explain this pretty thoroughly in my application. Lastly, I was suspended for three days during my high-school year, because I was caught with alcohol on campus. That was about 4 years ago (seems like a lifetime).
  • Extra-curricular? I don’t know how strong or weak I am. I believe my investing experience is very helpful, but I don’t have much going for me besides that. No proper internships, leadership positions or volunteering.

My strengths:

  • GPA: I know my GPA is strong, but I see a lot of other students on here that have the same stats, so I feel like it’ll take more than just this. Especially with those acceptance rates.
  • Essay: My essay builds a lot on my past mistakes and hardships. In middle-school I was bullied and my father passed away soon afterwards. After those experiences I basically gave up on school, because I didn’t feel safe and didn’t know what I wanted to do in the first place. After briefly explaining those experiences, I wrote about how and why I have changed and what my aspirations are. Lastly, I elaborated why I want to transfer away from community college.
  • Recommendation: I feel very comfortable with my recommendations. I think this will help me a lot.
  • My investing experience: I didn’t write numbers into the application, but I did mention that I will be paying for the majority, if not all, of my tuition purely from my profits.

I don’t think that I am a typical applicant and that makes me even more nervous. On one hand, I might stand out, but I don’t have the perfect academic history many other students have.