final draft of essay needs critique

[stasis]

<p>i just redid my entire essay for perhaps the 20th time. i need some people to read it.</p>

<p>any readers?</p>

[Sriacha]

<p>I'd love to take a look</p>

[sak09]

<p>go ahead and PM me.</p>

[stasis]

<p>thanks! i'll be PMing it to you. anyone else?</p>