<p>PM me I’ll give you feedback</p>
<p>To swim to da end…that’s a great ID. Did you use it in your essay? Your mom is right to be paranoid… Truth: my son is a senior too…but I’m a teacher, so I’m used to separating my kids from what I do. I don’t try to mess up kids I’m trying to help. Honest! Finally, I’m obsessive about grammar, as well as “the voice”. If you’d like my opinion and suggested edits, pls email me at <a href="mailto:zweebopp@yahoo.com">zweebopp@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>PS: that ID was a joke to my son who wanted to know what other name I was considering naming him when he was born. I told him it was ________ or Zweebopp.</p>
<p>i’ll read! PM me</p>
<p>I’ll read…</p>
<p>PM me. I will read it and provide you with feedback.</p>
<p>I can read and comment on it if you want. PM me.</p>
<p>PM Please. Will read. Do mention if you’re looking for something in it to improve upon.</p>
<p>Yes, I have time. PM me.</p>
<p>why not, congrats! pm me…</p>
<p>PM it to me too…</p>
<p>I’d be willing to read it. PM it to me if you’d like</p>