Finally, my essay: "He, Who Influenced Me to Finally Believe"...Critique?

College Essays
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<p>At long last, I have finished my CommonApp. essay for NYU. ;] I'm fairly happy with it, I just don't know if it's truely my best (I do my best writing when I'm dead tired so that I don't get too easily distracted, so there's bound to be loads of spelling and grammar errors). I just really needed to get it typed and reviewed.</p>

<p>Anyone interested in critiquing and giving constructed critisism? =D</p>

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<p>Sure. I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>I can review it.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’d love to read it… and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account… but I’d prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href=“mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu”>sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>