<p>Hello everyone I have finished my Essay today and had a professor to read it at the local community college here in Tampa. Would any current FSU students like to read it? Or any parents? I would love to hear your criticism =) I actually ended up writing two one edited and proofread by the professor and another by my parents.</p>
<p>Thank You for anyone that's willing to help =)</p>
<p>Go 'NOLES!!!</p>