(FIRST DRAFT) Common App - A person who has had a significant influence (My Father)

College Essays
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<p>TOPIC: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.</p>

<p>I haven't really done too much brainstorming and ended up cramming this essay last night since it was homework. I feel that it is too general and doesn't really flow as well as I wanted..nor does it stand out. I do feel if it was written better with more details and imagery maybe it will. I don't think I described the influence too well either. Anyway whoever is willing to read and critique it please respond.
Thanks</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you’d like!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I can read it if you need more feedback</p>

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<p>I can help you edit it!
pm it over</p>