<p>I've fully completed my college essay and talked about none other than my Mom. I had gotten some mixed reviews about how its strongly ill-advised to write about your mother/father because of falling into the trap of talking more about your influence in the essay, and "losing your voice" in the process. I tried my best to balance it out between my Mother and I and am strongly thinking about throwing out this essay that I worked so hard on because I'm not confident enough that It'll portray me enough that colleges will get to know me as an individual. I would love if someone could help critique my essay and help me decide whether or not there are any changes I can make or if I should just abandon this essay altogether and start a new one. Any help is appreciated. =)</p>
<p>I can do that, send it over! :)</p>