First Draft of College Essay....care to read it?

<p>Does anyone want to read my essay? I am not sure if I just need to tweak it or completely redo it. Please respond and I'll PM it to you. Thanks!</p>

<p>..............please?</p>

<p>sure I'll read it, just send it to me on college confidential in private messages. I'll give you advice and feedback.</p>

<p>thanks arieltriton! bumpppppppppp</p>