First post here - UC Statement help!

<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>I just found this website and it looks like some of you guys could be really helpful as far as reviewing essays goes. I have not taken any college essay writing classes, so I need someone to make sure I'm doing the right kind of thing with my UC statements. Just fyi, my ideal school is Berkeley, and then UCLA.</p>

<p>Thanks,</p>

<p>Travis</p>

<p>bumppping it uppppp</p>