<p>hey all,</p>
<p>i took a SAT prep course held by New Oriental in beijing this past summer and i want to share some helpful pointers i learn about the essay to offset the bad karma ; P</p>
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<li>don’t try to be fancy…just make the essay structured and simple.
example of how it should be structured (i’m gonna try to reproduce this to the best of my…memory)</li>
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<p>1st paragraph:
restate the prompt and tie it into your two examples. introduce your examples. thesis.</p>
<p>use the PIE formula for each body paragraph.
P point: state the point of your paragraph
I illustrate your point with examples
E explian your positio, both what it means and how your example supports it.</p>
<p>the second body example should connect to the thesis.</p>
<p>body 2</p>
<p>topic sentence should refer back to the thesis and the first example
another PIE paragraph.</p>
<p>conclusion:
summarize the main points of the essay or explain the implication of your thesis. “in the light of the above example, it is clear the change is not always for the bes. the examples of industrialization and nuclear technology demonstrate that change, while in some ways beneficial, bring about a number of negative consequences.”</p>
<p>tip on picking your example…stick with like 4 people and learn them well.
example, learn everything you can about Henry Ford and his Company, then Steve JObs and apple, BG and microsoft, and Randy Pausch, professor famous for his “last lecture”. learn their life and try to tie it into your prompt.</p>
<p>a essay about success and happiness…randy pausch (battling cancer) and ford (making cars avalible.)<br>
technology/learning from difficulties (Jobs and Ford)
deception turns good (microsoft, and Ford with the start of his company)
questions the ideas of authority (Ford and Jobs vs IBM)
motivation (Ford (there seems to be a pattern) and Job)</p>
<p>those don;t have to the four people, but you see how it can help.
other people: Thomas edison, wright brothers, neil armstrong, </p>
<p>try not to bother with personal history, someone else’s life is probably more exciting than yours, unless that’s not true. </p>
<p>use western european history instead of us history unless it fits really well, same with using american literature instead of european. </p>
<p>also refer to some interesting books. Old man and the sea, even harry potter, LOTR. </p>
<p>historical events taht could be used.
Greece, Spainese armada, Socrates (person), Alexander (person), Gladiators (historic perspectives), fall of rome, black death, Columbus, 1666 fire of london, GW rules of Good behavior, declaration of independence (american revolution could be used, despite me saying that you shouldn;t use american history), waterloo, </p>
<p>that;s what i can think of so far, sorry for being messy, i just typed it up really quick. </p>
<p>PM me if you have question or want some tips on the other sections.</p>