<p>I got a 12 essay, 790 overall and I did not use a single word that a 7th grader wouldn’t know. Here are some important tips that I followed:</p>
<p>The graders do NOT want to see that you are putting “vocab” words in your essay for the sake of putting them in, and they can tell when you do it. What they want to see for a 12 is the following:</p>
<p>clear, easy to follow organization including an introduction, 2 examples, and a conclusion</p>
<p>WELL DEVELOPED examples. Throw in a lot of crap about the background of your examples. I used Andrew Carnegie as one, so I said where he was born, what years Carnegie Steel was running, etc.</p>
<p>EVEN IF IT IS FACTUALLY INCORRECT, put in facts or statistics. Don’t go overboard, but definitely do some. They can’t count you off for being factually incorrect. I have heard a story about a guy who got 11 after writing about Thomas Jefferson’s presidency in the 1950s!</p>
<p>MAKE IT LONG. There was a legitimate study done by a professor somewhere (I think at MIT) which showed that he could predict the grade of an essay from ACROSS THE ROOM with remarkable accuracy. The longer the essay, the higher score you will get. It’s stupid, but it’s the way it works. You want to be writing at 100 mph for 20 solid minutes.</p>
<p>MAKE IT NEAT,
If you write neatly, you will please the readers because they will find it easier to understand your handwriting. They are ****ed and bored and the last thing they want to do is decipher some kind of chicken scratch.</p>
<p>CROSS OUT SOME THINGS. You heard me right! Part of the across the room study showed that if things were crossed out, it shows that you put some time into “editing” it and trying to make it better. The idea is that it’s a first draft, so they actually look for scratched out words/lines. (As long as it’s done relatively neatly). This will also add to your length. Seriously, do it!</p>
<p>Those are the strategies I used for the test, and I did well on it. One other thing is be prepared with some generic examples and facts beforehand. If you don’t remember facts, make some up! Really! You could even make up a foreign book if you are desperate (my buddy did that and got an 11).</p>
<p>I think that historical and literature examples are the best and personal examples are NOT what they are necessarily looking for. I wish you luck, follow those steps and I’m sure you can do well!</p>