<p>by the way,
its all mostly luck so...
GOOD LUCK!</p>
<p>Thanks for your inputs guys.</p>
<p>Is it better to use two examples or three? With two, you can develop them more...</p>
<p>will HYPSM look down at me if they read my SAT essay (it's included in the SAT score CB sends) and see that personal stuff is made up?</p>
<p>Because my college app essay will include some strange things about myself which are actually true, so I am worried if i BS'ed on the SAT those top college might wonder if my app essay is made up or not.</p>
<p>I used real world examples (Divorce rate and islamic fundamentalists) and received a 10. It was not my best work. I used too many colloquial terms, and my side was well supported, but my conclusion was weak. It restated too much, as I told, and did not show.</p>