Georgetown Special Talents and Skills Section

For the section of the Georgetown application where it asks you to “Indicate any special talents or skills that you possess”, how does this sound? Am I answering this quetion correctly? Is it unique? Do I sound like I’m bragging too much? Is grammar correct? HeLp…Be Honest

Living in a community where the African-American population is not only low, but low-achieving, I saw a need for programs in my school that could change that. Since working with the Black Student Achievement Program at (my schools’ name), I have seen membership in my school’s merit-based African culture organizations increase 500%. I would like to believe that I possess the skill to unite people and encourage them to create and achieve goals for themselves.