Hi All,
I am writing my transfer essay for fall 2020 and my reasons for transferring are: 1) the student body is too small 2) everyone at the school is studying business (its a business school)- I want a more academically diverse student body 3) I don’t like the social atmosphere at the school (very boring, partly due to how small it is).
Do you think any of the reasons are good reasons to transfer? I should also mention I am not transferring because of academic reasons. Thanks.
the fact that you resorted to CC, in an effort to verify your reasons for transfer might I add, shows that you’re not as dedicated as the next applicant who - by the way - is 100% confident in his reasons for transfer.
"I am not transferring because of academic reasons. "
You just wrote that most of the students at your current university are business majors, and you want more academic diversity. How is that not an academic reason?
You listed three criticisms of the current program. Not a single positive reason for choosing the new target school. It comes across as generic and that any bigger college will do it. Not the way to impress adcoms.