Grade my essay! (URGENT: SAT in a day)

<p>I'm taking the Jan SAT, so can someone grade my essay and tell me what to improve on? Thanks!</p>

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<p>^am sorry @20Summer08… I got ur pm… I really am not in shape to do that now… i think amma f**ck up myself…sry man… Maybe after i get some sleep…
I really am sorry…</p>

<p>Its okay!! :slight_smile:
Bump</p>

<p>This is a ten.</p>

<p>No timed essay is perfect, but it seems clear to me that you’re an advanced writer, probably an AP student.</p>

<p>I always never say this, but don’t sweat this test.</p>

<p>Just make sure to get some rest and do NOT “go out” tonight.</p>

<p>Wow, really? Thank you so much!!</p>