Grade MY ESSAY! And I'll grade back. Post a link!

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<p>So I just finished another essay. But this time, instead of typing, I want to see if the general populous can read my handwriting, so I took a picture of it:</p>

<p>page 1: Imageshack</a> - img20130219195913.jpg
page 2: Imageshack</a> - img20130219195938.jpg</p>

<p>Also I know it's not on the SAT essay format sheet of paper. I'll make sure the next one I write will be on one of those :)</p>

<p>**horrible lighting. D: I'm so sorry!</p>

<p>Hopefully it's readable. </p>

<p>Thanks! :)</p>

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<p>You have very good handwriting but that’s a low-quality picture and I have low-quality eyeballs.</p>

<p>Main problems:

  1. You have a contradiction going on in the first paragraph.
  2. Many grammar/punctuation issues.
  3. Informal, especially with “basically it’s about.”
  4. Don’t use contractions.
  5. Overuse of certain words, most notably “comical,” “awkward,” and “influx.”</p>

<p>Here’s my essay from January 26. It got a 10.
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[sat1</a> | Flickr - Photo Sharing!](<a href=“http://www.■■■■■■■■■■/photos/87932479@N08/8491353596/in/photostream/]sat1”>sat1 | ladyofpermutations | Flickr)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a better one tomorrow. Also what grade?</p>

<p>And I can’t go on your link. One said I don’t have permission.</p>

<p>Relink me it! I’ll grade it tomorrow. Night!</p>

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<p>I’m in 11th grade and the essay got a 10.
One of the links worked, right? I just reset the first one.</p>

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<p>I meant the grade for the essay lol</p>