Grade my SAT essay! (MArch 2014)

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<p>Hello, first of all Im new here (I posted once around a year ago, but since then I have only lurked), so please correct me if I did something wrong.
Anyways, I recently took the SAT scoring a 1950 global first try and 720 in writing. I won't mention my score to avoid any kind of bias on your grading (until a bit later). Please grade me.</p>

<p>Prompt: Should people who are more fortunate than others have more of a moral obligation to help those who are less fortunate? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
Essay screenshots:
<a href="http://i.gyazo.com/2d266f2ad66930383ba55cbc4e666ed1.png"&gt;http://i.gyazo.com/2d266f2ad66930383ba55cbc4e666ed1.png&lt;/a> (page 1)
<a href="http://gyazo.com/72f9738d754fd73e5c0179e72c08ee1f"&gt;http://gyazo.com/72f9738d754fd73e5c0179e72c08ee1f&lt;/a> (page 2)</p>

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<p>You dance around the actual question, but the quality of your writing puts this into double digits.</p>

<p>Are you an AP English student?</p>

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<p>I’d read it if you posted a Word version. Its too sloppy as is and I think that could hurt your grade.</p>

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<p>8 </p>

<p>tag me when you decide to reveal the score</p>