<p>When asked to provide a graded writing sample, would you provide a scan of the original document with instructor corrections and grade, or send in a copy that has been revised with the recommended changes?</p>
<p>I would send a copy with the teachers comments, since it shows what you thought was acceptable to turn in and the type of feedback you have gotten in high school. However, if you want, you can attach a corrected copy to note that you take direction well. Or, just call the school and ask.</p>
<p>Thanks! My son said he will email them to find out.</p>
<p>I would send the one with the instuctor comments, because it will also give an indication of what is ‘expected’ at the school. A revised copy, while it will directly address the teacher’ comments, won’t actually include any of the comments from the teacher, which is part of what I think they’re looking for.</p>